English 203                                                                           Spring 2009

Introduction to Creative Writing (Poetry)                             Professor Ostrom

MWF 10:00 Wyatt 308

 

Welcome to English 203. Here is some basic information:

 

My Office: Wyatt 336. Office-Hours for Spring 2009: Mondays and Wednesdays, 2:00-3:15, and by appointment, of course.

 

English Department’s telephone: x3235 (messages); my telephone: x3434 (voice mail). Electronic mail: ostrom@ups.edu. The English Department’s mailboxes are located in the room next to the Philosophy Department’s main office on the third floor of Wyatt Hall. 

Home page: www.ups.edu/faculty/ostrom/. A copy of this syllabus will be posted on the home page.

 

The University’s Equal Opportunity Statement

 

The University of Puget Sound does not discriminate in education or employment on the basis of sex, race, color, national origin, religion, creed, age, disability, marital or familial status, sexual orientation, Vietnam-era veteran status, gender identity, or any other basis prohibited by local, state, or federal laws. This policy complies with the spirit and the letter of applicable federal, state and local laws, including Title IX of the Education Amendments of 1972, Sections 503 and 504 of the Rehabilitation Act of 1973, and the Americans with Disabilities Act of 1990. Questions about the policy may be referred to the University's Director of Human Resources and Affirmative Action (253-879-3116) or the Office of Civil Rights, Department of Education, Washington, D.C. 20202.

 

Aims of the Course

 

English 203 explores the process of writing poetry, so it necessarily features much writing and revising, in and out of class.  Reading the textbook and the anthology will familiarize us with important poetry published in English; just as musicians and painters study the compositions and paintings that have come before, we will enrich our awareness of poetry from a variety of traditions.  We will also build up a lexicon necessary to the study of poetry-writing, and we will assemble and deploy a variety of techniques appropriate to all stages of the writing-and-revising process.  A course in writing poetry is obviously a public, cooperative way of studying the art, so anyone who believes that writing poetry must be a solitary, reclusive process will not find the venue productive, and anyone who takes such a course is invited to work to make the venue productive.  In some ways, English 203 will demystify poetry and the writing of it; in other ways it will honor the persistent mysteries of art in general and poetry in particular.  To a great extent, writing poetry is hard work, but it is often pleasurably hard work, and it is not only hard work.  Spontaneity, intuition, improvisation, accident, wit, passion, and luck are also involved. 


 

 

In the unlikely event you thought, back in November, that taking the course would be a relatively effortless way to accumulate academic credit, please reconsider your decision to take English 203, for you may be disappointed in how much the course asks of you.  I don’t offer this advice out of malice but simply based on experience.  The same advice is operative in the event you believe poetry shouldn’t be analyzed or studied.

 

The words “poem,” “poet,” and “poetry” seem to have entered the written English language in the 13th and 14th centuries, and they are rooted in the Latin word poesis.  In the form of long verse-stories like the Iliad, songs, chants, etc., poetry has been part of all civilizations, from the original inhabitants of what is now called North American to those of what is now known as Asia.  So we’re dealing with a form of literature much older than the novel, which arose in English in the 18th century and was preceded by Don Quixote in Spanish.

 

One of Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s definitions of poetry is contained in the following quotation:  "I wish our clever young poets would remember my homely definitions of prose and poetry; that is prose—words in their best order; poetry—the best words in their best order." (from Table Talk).

 

A poem is a piece of art made of words.  The arrangement of words tends to be more concentrated than other kinds of arrangements, such as essays or textbooks, and customarily it emphasizes the ways in which words on the page create images and sounds in the mind.  It is not necessarily a spoken art, but to a large extent it remains one Consequently, we will often read our poems and the poetry of others out loud.  The purpose of doing so is chiefly practical: reading work out loud sharpens our awareness of the words on the page and of what is working and what is not.  So please don’t think that by inviting you to read out loud I’m trying to put you on the spot or that I’m looking for a performance.  The idea is simply to hear the words in addition to seeing them. I will do my fair share of reading aloud, too.

And finally, I should alert you to the fact that we will write spontaneously in class sometimes, without much warning—not that it’s a dangerous thing that suggests a warning is necessary.

 

Briefly, About the Professor

 

Sometimes students want to know a bit about the professor; in a paragraph, here’s a bit: I’ve taught at the University of Puget Sound for quite some time.  My relationship with poetry is multifaceted.  I have enjoyed reading it for decades.  I studied it when I was an undergraduate English major and then when I was a doctoral student, going so far as to write a dissertation on poetry from the British Romantic period, circa 1789-1832.  However, I also write and publish poetry. Much of the poetry I published in magazines and anthologies has been collected in The Coast Starlight: Collected Poems 1976-2006 (Indianapolis, 2006). I have also published articles and books on how to write poetry and how to teach creative writing.  For example, I’m a co-author of Metro: Journeys in Writing Creatively (Longman, 2001).  At Puget Sound I also teach the first-year seminar in writing and rhetoric, Introduction to English Studies, fiction-writing, and courses in literature. 

 

The Etiquette and Atmosphere of the Course

 

Here are some guidelines to which all of us should adhere. None of them will be surprising or difficult. In fact, I hope they’ll seem familiar, even obvious, but sometimes it’s good to reaffirm the familiar. All are aimed at creating a productive, workable environment.                                                                                                      

 Please do attend class unless you are ill or otherwise indisposed, and please do arrive on time.  Attendance guidelines: Each absence after the third one will start to erode your final grade.  Each late arrival after the second one counts as an absence. 

To some degree, a college classroom has become an old fashioned, counter-cultural space that asks us to lengthen our attention-spans when the culture at large seeks to shorten them.  Please do listen while others are talking. Although conversations on the side are usually not intended to be rude or disruptive, they can have that effect. Respect each other and yourselves. Before class begins, turn off the electronic devices. If you use a lap-top computer in class, please use it only to take notes, not to get on the Internet or otherwise distract yourself and others. Please do not habitually get up and leave class.  I realize that, every so often, one needs to leave class for a few minutes.  But more than every so often is not appropriate. Becoming a poet requires stamina, persistence, resilience, and patience. Contrary to popular opinion, poets are tough-minded lot. Unlike squirrels, they’re not skittish.

Please do your best. The more each of us contributes to the course, the more each of us will get out of it. Please do not plagiarize.

Please turn in work and complete reading-assignments on time. But also please ask me to clarify assignments and guidelines if they are unclear, and please let me know if an illness or an emergency has prevented you from completing your work on time.

Please do acquire the books required for the course, read them according to the syllabus, and bring them to class on the appropriate days. Acquire the editions I’ve ordered through the bookstore, even if you do not buy them at the bookstore. 

Please don’t eat in class (every professor has his or her pet-peeves); a cup of coffee (for example) is fine, however.


 

 

Required Books (Two)

 

The books are required, but good used copies are, of course, more than acceptable. Do bring the books to class on the appropriate days.

 

Kevin Clark, The Mind’s Eye: A Guide to Writing Poetry.  New York: Pearson, 2008. 

 

Margaret Ferguson, Mary Jo Salter, and Jon Stallworthy, editors, The Norton Anthology of Poetry. Fifth edition. New York: W.W. Norton, 2005. Please do acquire the fifth edition.

 

Elements on Which Your Final Grade Will Be Based

 

A portfolio of poems you have written and revised in the course: 50 per cent, approximately.

 

Your participation: coming to class regularly, on time, and prepared; contributing productively to discussions and workshop-sessions; doing the work of the course: 25 per cent, approximately.  See “The Etiquette and Atmosphere of the Course” above and the schedule below for more details on what is expected in the way of participation.

 

Two tests on reading and terminology: 25 per cent (total), approximately.  Appended to the syllabus are a list of terms and a list of poets; the tests will be related significantly to these lists.

 

Extra credit: Attend a poetry reading, on campus or in the community, and write a brief (one page) response to the reading.  Submit the response to me. You may get credit for attending more than one reading, too.

 

Schedule of Meetings, Assignments, Topics, and Tasks

 

Unit: What Is a Poem, How Do We Write One, and Why Do We Write and Read Poetry?

 

Wednesday, January 21. Overview of the course.  Please read the syllabus carefully, in class and after the first session, see if you have any questions about it, and to see if indeed you want to remain in the course.  Defining poetry. Discussing the process of writing poems.

 

Friday, January 23.  For today, please read the Introduction and Chapter One of The Mind’s Eye, including the poems.

 

Monday, January 26.  Write a new poem for today, no longer than a page, typed, with a title and your name.  Bring one copy for me, one for you, and one for a classmate (total = 3). Guidelines for and a practice-run of responding to classmates’ poems.

 

Wednesday, January 28.  For today, please read Chapter Two of The Mind’s Eye. Read the poems carefully, determine which ones you appreciate, and focus on particular lines or phrases.

 

Friday, January 30.  Full-class workshop.  Poem due, no longer than one page, typed.  You will need a copy for me, a copy for you, and a copy for at least every other student in class (total = 11 or 12).  This will be our only full-class workshop of the term because a workshop of 20 or so students takes up a lot of time.  However, one full-class session will help establish the best practices for responding to poems. During the rest of the term, you will work in smaller groups when responding to and presenting poems. This is an excellent time to read ahead, so start reading “Versification,” by Jon Stallworthy, in the Norton anthology, pp. 2027-2052.  Take notes.

 

Monday, February 2.  Workshop, continued.

 

Wednesday, February 4. Workshop, continued.

 

Friday, February 6. Workshop, continued.

 

Monday, February 9.  Workshop concluded.

 

Unit: How Poetry Has Changed

 

Wednesday, February 11. For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter III. In the Norton anthology, please read “The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner,” 1553, “We Real Cool,” 1588, “The Simple Truth,” 1763, “Dusting,” 1987, and “Valentine,” 1948.

 

Friday, February 13. Some key poems: For today, please read Frost, “The Road Not Taken,” 1232, Stevens, “The Emperor of Ice-Cream,” 1256, Williams, “This Is Just To Say,” 1274, Lawrence, “Snake,” 1286, Pound, “In a Station of the Metro,” 1297, Eliot, “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock,” 1340, Owen, “Dulce et Decorum Est,” 1387, cummings, “since feeling is first,” 1394.  Generate points and topics you want to discuss about these poems.

 

Monday, February 16. Guided writing, in class.

 

Wednesday, February 18.  Poem due.  One copy for me, one copy for you, and at least three copies for your group (total = at least 5).  Workshop.

 

Friday, February 20.  Workshop.

 

Unit: Basics of Formal Verse and Prosody

 

Monday, February 23.  For today, please go over your notes from having read “Versification,” by Jon Stallworthy, in the Norton anthology, pp. 2027-2052, and please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter 8. What questions do you have about “frames and forms” of poetry?  What is one of your favorite poems in formal verse and why? Please bring both books to class.

 

Wednesday, February 25. More key poems: Shakespeare, “Sonnet 18,” 259, Donne, “The Flea,” 309, Blake, “The Tyger,” 743, Wordsworth, “Surprised by Joy,” 804, Hopkins, “The Windhover,” 1166, Housman, “To an Athlete Dying Young,” 1174, Yeats, “The Second Coming,” 1196, Robinson, “Richard Cory,” 1212, Hughes, “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,” 1430, Cullen, “Yet Do I Marvel,” 1446, Roethke, “The Waking,” 1500.

 

Friday, February 27. Discussing more of the poems assigned for the 25th. Some guided writing focused on sound, meter, verse.

 

Unit: Persons, Places, Things, and Scenes

 

Monday, March 2.  For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter Four.  Consider sentiment vs. sentimentality, revising for clarity, and how these topics apply to your own work. Review for test.

 

Wednesday, March 4.  Poem due. Same number of copies as usual. Workshop.

 

Friday, March 6.  Workshop.

 

Monday, March 9. Test.

 

Wednesday, March 12.  For today, read Chapter 5 of The Mind’s Eye, and concentrate on the poems appearing on pages 78, 81, and 82. Guided writing.

 

Friday, March 13.  Field trip. Ekphrasis.

 

Spring Break

 

Monday, March 23. Thing-poems. Please read Hopkins, “God’s Grandeur,” 1166, Moore, “To a Chameleon,” 1328, Simic, “Watch Repair,” 1891, Ormsby, “Starfish” and “Skunk Cabbage,” 1925, 1926, Komunyakaa, “Facing It,” 1949, Zarin, “The Ant Hill,” 2013.

 

Wednesday, March 25.  Poem due. The usual number of copies.  Workshop.

 

Friday, March 27.. Workshop.

 

Monday, March 30.  For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter 7. Multiple perspectives. Please read “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird.”

 

Unit: Sympathy, Sadness, Surprise, Love, Loss, and Left Field

 

Wednesday, April 1. For today, please read Parker, “Unfortunate Coincidence,” 1391, Graves, “Love Without Hope,” 1400, Hughes, “Harlem,” 1433, Cullen, “Incident,” 1446, Eberhart, “The Fury of Aerial Bombardment,” 1450, Auden, “Lullaby,” 1465, Kock, “You Were Wearing,” “Variations,” and “To My Twenties,” 1692-94, Ginsberg, from Howl, 1708.

 

Friday, April 3. Guided Writing. Look ahead to April 10, and begin your search.

 

Monday, April 6.  Poem due.  The usual number of copies.  Workshop

 

Wednesday, April 8.  Workshop.

 

Friday, April 10.  Select a poem (from the anthology) that you especially like, and write a few sentences about why you like it.

 

Monday, April 13.  For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter Twelve.  Please look ahead to April 18 and begin your search for a love poem.

 

Wednesday, April 15.  Bring in two or three of your poems, as is—ones you’d especially like to revise.  Guided revision.

 

Friday, April 17.  For today, please choose a love poem, the definition of which is up to you, from the Norton anthology that we have not yet read for class and that you especially like. 

 

Monday, April 20. Poem due.  The usual number of copies.  Workshop.

 

Wednesday, April 22.  Workshop.

 

Friday, April 24.  For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, Chapter 13. Think about some topics that a) you have wanted to write about but b) often seem too difficult to write about--so difficult that you may not have been able to generate a successful poem or story about them. Make a list.

 

Monday, April 27. For today, please read The Mind’s Eye, chapter 14. Varieties of humor. Review for test.

 

Wednesday April 29.  Poem due. The usual number of copies. Workshop.

 

Friday, May 1.  Workshop.

 

Monday, May 4.  Test.

 

Wednesday, May 6.  Review guidelines for portfolio.

 

Portfolio due at my office, Wyatt 336, by 4:00 p.m. on May 14. 

 

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Terminology

 

 

Adjective                                                                                 

Allegory                                                                       Noun

Alliteration                                                                    Ode

Anapest/Anapestic                                                        Parable

Article                                                                          Parody

Assonance                                                                    Pentameter

Ballad                                                                           Persona

Blank Verse                                                                 Personification             

Blues (lyric-form of)                                                      Poetics

Cliché                                                                           Preposition

Consonance                                                                 Satire

Dactyl/Dactylic                                                 Scansion                                  

Elegy                                                                            Sentimentality

Enjambment                                                                 Sestina

Foot (with regard to poetry)                                          Simile

Iamb/Iambic                                                                 Sonnet (English/Shakespearian)

Interior Monologue                                                       Sonnet (Italian/Petrarchan)

Metaphor                                                                     Spondee

Meter (with regard to poetry)                                        Sprung Rhythm

Metonymy                                                                    Stanza                                                 

Mimesis                                                                        Surrealism

Synecdoche

Tetrameter

Trochee/Trochaic

Villanelle

 

 

 

 

Poets

 

One ought to know at least one poem by each poet on the list.  In some obvious cases, one ought to know more than one poem by the poet.

 

Ai

Alexander, Elizabeth

Atwood, Margaret

Auden, W.H.

Baraka, Amiri

Basho, Matsuo

Baudelaire, Charles

Bishop, Elizabeth

Blake, William

Bly, Robert

Brooks, Gwendolyn

Browning, Elizabeth Barrett

Browning, Robert

Byron, Lord

Cavafy, C.P.

Chin, Marilyn

Coleridge, S.T.

Collins, Billy

Dante

Dickinson, Emily

Donne, John

Doty, Mark

Dove, Rita

Eliot, T.S.

Erdrich, Louise

Frost, Robert

Ginsberg, Allen

Halliday, Mark

Homer

Hopkins, Gerard Manley

Housman, A.E.

Hughes, Langston

Jarrell, Randall

Jeffers, Robinson

Keats, John

Kooser, Ted

Layton, Irving

Lee, Li Young

Lorca, Federico Garcia

Marvel, Andrew

Milton, John

Neruda, Pablo

Owen, Wilfred

Plath, Sylvia

Poe, Edgar Allan

Pope, Alexander

Pound, Ezra

Sappho

Shakespeare, William

Shapiro, Karl

Shelley, Percy

Snyder, Gary

Soto, Gary

Tennyson, Alfred

Trethewey, Natasha

Walcott, Derek

Whitman, Walt

Williams, W.C.

Wordsworth, Wiliam

Yeats, W.B.